First, there's a great opening line to the letter: "This Christmas, will you send £30 to support Krumbs Café in York and give people with learning disabilities the help they need?"
It gets straight to the point and highlights its greatest virtue - this is a local appeal for local support. Just 260 York residents giving £30 each would offer opportunities for dozens of their neighbours with learning disabilities to improve their skills.
Second, the whole thing talks of a simple low-cost idea to transform local lives. There's even an incentive - a free mince pie, which you can claim only when you visit the café.
Interestingly, United Response didn't get the support it needed from the local residents - at least, not from the cold mailshot. Most of the money raised was from local trusts.
The mailshot only broke even, despite the appeal in local press and radio, a well-crafted mailing piece, a great incentive and a locally targeted campaign. There weren't even any pack creation costs in the calculation. That shows how tough it is for charities supporting people with learning disabilities to raise money in the cold market. Pity, because it was a great mailpack.
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